10.25.2006
Here
Another poem we never got to in workshop. Comments, criticisms greatly appreciated.
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POEM
Felt previously for you
what only in the moment knew
was a particular sort of fear.
What I held above was neither
your body nor any perception of it
but another woman you allowed
to sleep there, her physical force
such that I had neither strength
nor will to defend myself. Then
with a mere reversal of light
you return alone to a male form
now merely in attendance
as when from window nearest yours
I heard the sharp rises of breath
that meant you both knew
exactly what body you were in.
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POEM
Felt previously for you
what only in the moment knew
was a particular sort of fear.
What I held above was neither
your body nor any perception of it
but another woman you allowed
to sleep there, her physical force
such that I had neither strength
nor will to defend myself. Then
with a mere reversal of light
you return alone to a male form
now merely in attendance
as when from window nearest yours
I heard the sharp rises of breath
that meant you both knew
exactly what body you were in.